quick beta needed

Hi

I need a quick beta doing on a Torchwood fic. Mainly I need spelling checks, a little comma herding and since it is to be written so it can be understood by someone with little to no Torchwood knowledge I need the data checked that I’ve included

This is part one and is about 6000 words

I’ll be offline for a couple of hours now, but if possible I would like to get it beta’d once I get back.

Thanks in advance

ETA: i got the lovely amberfocus  to do it